Moment in time
Rhib boat By Iris.
My class went to Opua wharf on a marvelous ship in Paihia. I went on a little emergency boat, bam we were off. I thought this would be the end of my life. I finally got used to the rapid fast boat and we zoomed around ahhhhhhh.I felt incredibly sore being hit by the bolting water coming out of the fire hose. A harsh salty taste brewed up in my mouth, wowwww! All of a sudden we stopped. Was that it?
Wow! Your vivid description really brings your experience to life. It sounded so exciting!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much the trip was amasing.
DeleteThat soulds cool
ReplyDeleteThat sounds great...
ReplyDeleteGood job.
ReplyDeletegraet writing Iris I really like it:)
ReplyDeleteWell done Iris! I really enjoyed reading about your amazing trip aboard the navy frigate. My favourite sentence was 'A harsh salty taste brewed up in my mouth'. I loved the descriptive words you used and could taste salt in my mouth as I kept reading.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Mr masters I loved the comment we also saw dolphins as well.
DeleteHey iris loved your writing about the rib boats.love to see more.😉😀
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Isabella love the comment.
DeleteThat's alright.Whats your favourite colour ?
DeleteHi isabella my favourite colours are green and blue.
Deletemy favourite colours are turquoise blue , magenta , neon green , neon pink and neon yellow.whats your favourite animal ?
Deletemy favourite animals are koala, kanagroo, bottlenose dolphin, maui dolphin, cats, puppies.
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